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mein or meree thanhai
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0 posted 2009-02-17 05:48 PM



I whispered …I love you
She kept a silence
I said.., I love you
She responded silence
I yelled once more
But I see only deep silence
I shouted ….. I hate you.!!!
…She smiled at me.
I went away with great despair
A voice follows me from my back
‘You didn’t understand my heart.
You didn’t heard the voice of my heart’
I heard it in my dream…… many times
Say onetime by her lips……
I failed to hear the voice of her heart.
I failed to see the tears on her cheek.


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-02-17 07:16 PM


It's a sad truth, that failure to 'see or hear' happens often, even in so-called love relationships.
Boshii2
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since 2009-02-01
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2 posted 2009-02-18 02:47 PM


women are like that
you've seen a cat with a mouse.

have you noticed how brave you have become ?
you amaze me
Boshii2

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