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illuminated truth
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since 2009-02-16
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0 posted 2009-02-16 06:30 PM


A poem I started one night but I haven't finished yet.


What was I to do?

Life as I knew it was completely through.

My eyes filled with tears, my heart with sorrow.

I was in such despair, I had gave up all hopes for a tomorrow.

You see, I was a lost soul

With not one dream, aspiration, or goal

I was flying in the sky

My feet were on the ground, yet life was steady passing me by

No one understood me

They felt my mind was void & empty

But that wasn’t right.

Because if they had searched hard enough then they would’ve seen a light.


© Copyright 2009 illuminated truth - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-02-16 09:02 PM


Being 'invisible' or lost is not a comfortable place for most people. Keep writing, and please enjoy the variety Pips has to offer.
Welcome!

steavenr
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2 posted 2009-02-17 08:08 PM


Welcome to PiP, and hopefully you will find yourself here among these blue pages...
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2009-02-18 08:56 AM


Welcome to PiP! You may very well
find yourself here, within the souls
of the poets that inhabit this
beautiful blue home.

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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