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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2009-02-16 01:03 PM


look in the mirror, should you dare
messages of reflections waiting there
soul-sifted shadow-stains on looking glass
cloud-like billows of a weathered past

border-bound frames of knowledged lore
won't see the images there before
time and space kissed in shadow's light
ere day relaxed into fathomless night

look in the mirror, should you dare
naught of the known lays open and bare
night seizes soft on turn of day
as creatures dark are left to play

rifting the field of skies stained burned
left to the looker of what is learned
see in the dark eyes of brightness spurned
left to the mind of mem'ries yearned

look in the mirror, should you dare
messages of reflections waiting there

[This message has been edited by steavenr (02-16-2009 02:55 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-02-16 02:11 PM


Dear Steave, I cannot trust the reflection in my mirror! ~ for it is a notorious liar!

Enjoyed your poem! Over the years I have written a few "reflective" mirror poems, myself! lol Yours is excellent!!!


Linda

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2009-02-16 05:32 PM


don't be afraid to look
it's only you always

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2009-02-16 08:45 PM


steavenr - true as looking into the mirror. Nice write...

BC

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