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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-02-16 01:47 AM




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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-02-16 02:21 AM


Having just peeked outside and admired the golden sunrise myself (through the trees), I can fully join you, dearest Alison, in your wonder filled appreciation.

Silently there, yes, but oh, so aware of the incredible awe inspiring beauty of it all! Thank you for another full immersion into your deep and precious perceptions!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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2 posted 2009-02-16 12:07 PM


a truly beautiful rendition of 'dawn's early light...did you find the pic for the poem or write the poem in inspiration of the pic?
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-02-16 12:09 PM


ms ali-san  enjoyed your pen and your camera...
OwlSA
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4 posted 2009-02-16 01:02 PM


Steaven, I can bet my life (almost) on it that Alison took that exquisite picture herself.  

Alison, I enjoyed this Alaskan delight, as much as I was expecting, and more!

Owl

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5 posted 2009-02-16 01:03 PM


totally gorgeous!
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-02-16 01:58 PM


Alison, I always appreciate your show of appreciation for Nature's beauty! I do so love these pic/poems of yours!

Love & Natural Light,
Linda

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7 posted 2009-02-16 02:45 PM


grand imagery (both poetic and photographic) ... as usual ... from this seriously talented author!

particularly fine opening lines!

serious, sustained applause for this 'penning'!

Alison
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8 posted 2009-02-16 03:49 PM


Margherita,

Thank you for joining me.  I am on my way out soon to get pictures - wanna come with?

Love,
Alison

PS - I'll have my three dogs so I hope you don't mind canine kisses.

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Thank you, Steaven.  Yep, our -Owl is 100% correct.  I take my own pictures and sometimes the words come when I look at the pictures.  Sometimes, I take the picture for the poem.  I think this time - they just went hand in hand somehow.

Alison

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Thank you, dear Daark.  And yes - I know what you know I know that you know and well .. you know.

Alison

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Diana,

You bring me so many smiles - and yes, you are right.

Your life is safe (thank God).

Love,
Alison

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Dixie,

Totally thank you, darlin'.

Love,
A

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Linda,

Thank you.  You make me feel all warm inside.

Love,
A

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Bruce,

That means a lot coming from you.

Alison

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9 posted 2009-02-16 05:33 PM


your visions are lovely within and without

vandana
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10 posted 2009-02-16 05:55 PM


very nice
Suncleaver
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11 posted 2009-02-16 06:28 PM


No matter how black the night, the sun will always break it.

Beautiful imagery Alyson.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Martie
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12 posted 2009-02-16 08:22 PM


Beautiful to eye and ear, Alison.
Robert E. Jordan
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13 posted 2009-02-16 08:42 PM


Yo dear Alison,

This is a great little presentation.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2009-02-16 08:51 PM


Alison - a most beautiful write, and graphic to go with it...

BC

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15 posted 2009-02-17 02:29 AM


I love how the world looks through your eyes, Alison.
                         Ida

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16 posted 2009-02-17 11:16 AM


I liked the repeat in this, it worked very well.

Impressed.


-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

OwlSA
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17 posted 2009-02-17 01:25 PM


Ooh, can I come with you and Margherita - for the company of both of you, for Alaska, and last, but not least, for the canine kisses and the dogalogs that go along with the canine kisses.  Please pass my messages on to them: "Woof, Woof, Woof!" (one each).  

Owl

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18 posted 2009-02-17 01:42 PM


Strong understanding of the power of this wonderful gift.  Much enjoyed your appreciation and sharing.
Margherita
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19 posted 2009-02-17 01:51 PM


You and Diana make me smile!! Yes, I would love to be part of this photo-safari and though I don't have much confidence with dogs, I am willing to take into account their kisses ... that is, if you assure me, that they are dry!!!

Love and hugs.
Margherita


Alison
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20 posted 2009-02-17 06:27 PM


beautiful goddess,

thank you and the feeling is mutual.

xoxoxo
Alison

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vandana,

way thank you.

Alison

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Suncleaver,

Thank you - I guess you would know about how the sun can cleave.  Right?  I appreciate you taking the time to comment.

Alison

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Martie,

I am truly happy that you enjoyed.

Alison

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Thank you, Friend Bobby.

Love,
A

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BC,

Thank you for taking the time.

Alison

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Ida,

Thank you.  I just see the beauty of nature and want to take it home.

Love,
Alison

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Hey Viking Guy,

Thank you lots.  -P backatcha!



A

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Diana darlin',

Of course.  The puppies would love to have your company.  They said they would even share their most favorite cookies!

They send love,
Alison

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Margherita,

Honest!  The kisses are dry.  Yep, for sure.  Positively.  Kinda.  Sorta.  Moist.  Maybe.  Truly Drooly.  Mostly.

xoxoxo,
Alison, Gromet,The Grand Matriarch Nana Dog, Stuart (aka Stupid) and Abby-xyz


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21 posted 2009-02-17 08:16 PM


I needed to come back to this now

thanks

Titia Geertman
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22 posted 2009-02-17 08:20 PM


Very beautiful Alison, words and photo.
No sunset today overhere, all is grey and wet.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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23 posted 2009-02-18 05:32 AM


oh my Ali-girl... this is amazing... what wonderful imagery to go with your words.. beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!!  

and love to you RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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24 posted 2009-02-18 06:59 AM


Alison, this is beautiful. I love the sunrise and sunset.
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25 posted 2009-02-18 08:51 AM


Another keeper for my library.
You've captured transcendence with this one.

OwlSA
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26 posted 2009-02-18 04:35 PM


Oh, Alison, say thank you to the puppalups, Gromet, Stuart and Abby-xyz for their beautiful offer to share their favourite cookies with me!  Tell them I accept with alacrity and explain to them that alacrity has nothing to do with electricity.  

(Whispering to Alison so the dogalogs don't hear - please don't call Stuart, Stupid, even though it is a play on the word, Stuart, and even if he says he doesn't mind.  Please?  He can't possibly be stupid - playful, wilful, spontaneous, yes - but not stupid.)

Margherita, after the puppies' initial kisses to you (it would hurt their feelings if you didn't let them kiss you once each), I will keep them occupied so that you don't have to worry.  

Owl

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27 posted 2009-02-18 05:00 PM


Lovely!!!


Juju

Alison
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28 posted 2009-02-19 01:28 AM


Thank you, Dixie, for coming back.

Love,
A

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Titia,

I am moved by your compliment.  Your photographs are incredible!

Thank you,
Alison

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RDB,

You know, girl, I think you are biased.  I love you too.

Ali

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Sue,

Thank you so much.  I love them too - and the sky and the clouds and the light.

Alison

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Kacy,

You make me so happy.  Thank you, beautiful one.

Love,
Alison

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Oh man, Diana, you are gonna make me confess!  Okay, my animals all talk (a lot).  Abby is the spelling champion of the family (except she adds "xyz" to the end of her name because she says it is "elegant".  She taught Stuart to spell his name and taught him this spelling S-t-u-p-i-d spells Stuart.  She taught him that "stupid" is spelled S-t-u-a-r-t.  So, there you go - it's not my fault and I can't convince S-t-u-p-i-d that he has been seriously d-u-p-e-d.  I call him Stuart Little.

Love you,
Alison

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Juju,

Thank you so much.

Alison

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