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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2009-02-15 03:35 AM


Luna

Her crescent’s pure,
soft, gentle light does touch
as wings the chill of night where
loving hearts in full embrace recall
in beauty and in grace her risings up,
her climbings out from sparkling ponds
where robes about her essence washed
in sweet perfumes of fragrant dreams
were sprouting blooms of glistening
ember soft as lace that lit the veil
that hid her face, so, lucid now,
it shows, reveals the placid
strength of her appeal.




© Copyright 2009 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2009-02-15 04:10 AM


Wow, dear Bob, what an incredible surprise to find this "Luna" in such fantastic presentation and touchingly beautiful words ... I am in awe.

A keeper!

Love,
Margherita

HelmutB
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2 posted 2009-02-16 12:10 PM


"strength of her appeal"
Well it appealed to me,..... nice

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  


suthern
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3 posted 2009-02-16 09:24 AM


Absolutely lovely! *S*
Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2009-02-16 11:15 AM


Lovely words honoring one of our amazing gifts from above.  You do it justice in your words and of course you know the format gets kudos from me.  You do these well.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2009-02-16 01:30 PM


Well, lookee, here! You're a poet/artist/man of surprises! Pure lunar magic! Loved it!

Bob, I like this side of your poetic expression as well as the spiritual one!

Love & Lunar Light,
Linda

Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2009-02-16 05:46 PM


Margherita,

Just want to say that I really do appreciate your support and I’ve noticed that you are usually one of the first to respond and to respond with such wonderful uplifting words of praise. WoW!!! You’ve truly honored me and my work each and every time. Thank you.


HelmutB,

Thank you. It’s always an honor to have my work appeal to someone. Thank you.


Suthern,

Thank you. I’ve discovered that your words may be few, but never lacking (smiles).


Mark Bohannan,

Well, you do need to know that I had a really good teacher (smiles).


Earth Angel,

Well, now, I love your exuberance and, considering the spiritual, lunar stuff, and them there angels that hang out on the earth and give such uplifting responses, I do suppose they are a bit related in that they’re heavenly and all. God bless and thanks.


-Bob

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2009-02-16 08:37 PM


Lighthousebob - very nicely done, everything goes together great...

BC

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8 posted 2009-02-16 11:50 PM


Beautifully done Bob.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

Lighthousebob
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9 posted 2009-02-17 03:09 PM


Bill Charles,

Thank you for your kind confirmation. It's always nice to read that something I've put together actually works out OK for others as well (smiles).


Mysteria,

It’s always a pleasure to hear from you and, also, I do thank you for your kind reply.

-Bob

Marchmadness
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10 posted 2009-02-18 12:57 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Bob. What an interesting way of presenting such a lovely poem.
                               Ida

Lighthousebob
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11 posted 2009-02-18 07:33 PM


Marchmadness,

Ahhhh, thank you, I'm very happy that you found my poem lovely and that you enjoyed the way that it was presented. Thank you.



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