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One Heaven Sent
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One Heaven Sent |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England 
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One heaven sent to soothe my pain To quench the fires as cleansing rain, One sent to deftly catch my tears, One sent to erase tortured years. One heaven sent to heal my heart I felt the gulf close from the start, One sent to bleed the venom dry, One sent to console every sigh. One heaven sent, eternal love. As she steps down from clouds above, One sent now to help me forget The tears, bile and blood I’ve shed. Dedicated to Shannon, my beloved. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (02-19-2009 03:40 PM).] |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
very touching and amazingly well written. did you draw that picture also? |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Suncleaver, There you go. This is a beautiful picture poem combination. I like this one loads. Keep up the great work. Bobby |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thanks guys. No I didn't draw the picture though I wish that I was that good, I can however console myself in that I have a modest skill in poetry... at least I hope so. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Quote: "I can however console myself in that I have a modest skill in poetry... at least I hope so." You do and more than modest! Very good!  turtle  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Nice Poem and nice art work. Very well done. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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