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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-02-14 07:26 PM


     Perfection

a dark, empty room
in a vacant house
filling with light

a bare-tree vale
in a boundless forest
filling with snow

a longing heart
in a bereft form
filling with love

sublime perfection

   ---b. e. adams (2/14/2009)

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (02-15-2009 10:18 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-02-14 07:33 PM


Wonderful visuals, dear Bruce!

Your eyes and your heart hold perfect beauty.

Happy Valentine's Day!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
2 posted 2009-02-14 07:34 PM


lovely
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2009-02-14 08:42 PM


A fine romantic 'longing' valentine.
Suncleaver
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4 posted 2009-02-14 09:05 PM


Beautiful imagery. All empty things long to be filled.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

gilead
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5 posted 2009-02-14 10:48 PM


A Valentine's thought as soft as snowfall in the barren vale, Bruce.

Thanks,

art

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6 posted 2009-02-15 10:09 PM


Thank you for sharing.  

Alison

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