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Open Poetry #44

Vienna Moons

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-02-14 07:10 PM

Vienna Moons

Paris was fine but right
now Vienna's on my mind,
where my sweet lover
is waiting for me there,
calling me everyday to
tell me how dearly she cares.

And if I were there
I'd be admiring her dearly,
loving her sincerely;
we'd be holding each other tight
enjoying the pleasures of the night,
I'd be inside of her bedroom,
in the aroma of her perfume,
soaking up the moonlite
in the warm glow of
a Vienna moon.

JamesLee
12February
2009

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (02-15-2009 02:46 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-02-14 07:20 PM

As always you long and dream so sweetly and romantically, dear James.

Love and Happy Valentine's Day, even at distance!

Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-02-14 07:28 PM

James,

This is lovely.

In the line:

"I'd me admiring her dearly,"

perhaps you mean "be" instead of "me".

Bobby

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

3 posted 2009-02-14 09:07 PM

Beautiful work James.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2009-02-15 11:57 PM

A sweet tender post my friend,

Very romantic to say the least.

You penned it well James.

Lindsay

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