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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

0 posted 2009-02-13 05:17 PM

*

My love for you

*

My love
for you
is measured
by every tear
of joy
my heart sheds
in silence
for the sheer
delight
of dancing
through life
with you.

There,
in the well
of my soul,
I let you
rise anew
each day
like my own
life giving,
sacred
sun.

As one
we meet
in dreams
upon the
full circle
rainbow
we create
with our sighs
to unite
our skies.

This love
so rare
is measured
by every
single breath
we share
in pure
consciousness
of being
divine seeds
in this enchanted
universe.

*

gilead
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since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

1 posted 2009-02-13 05:24 PM

". . . divine seeds in this enchanted universe." What a marvelous thought that makes for a love endued with magic and boundless beauty!

A delightful read, Margherita!

Thanks,

art

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2009-02-13 05:32 PM

I liked this one

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-02-13 05:53 PM

M'dear Margherita ~

Excuse my paraphrasing of your poetic expression for in your words, I found
what I needed to use in my reply!

~ Your enchanting words are divine seeds that spread your glorious Spirit Light into the Universe.

Love you!

Linda

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

4 posted 2009-02-14 04:55 AM

we meet
in dreams
upon the
full circle
rainbow
we create
with our sighs
to unite
our skies.

**********

very wonderful words thank you my dear friend .

Nourzihane

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2009-02-14 04:59 AM

ouah Margherita, I love the poem and specially

divine seeds
in this enchanted
universe.

this is superb. Tender homage to the loved one.

have a sweet day

yann

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

6 posted 2009-02-14 07:32 AM

You might be speaking to God or might be whispering to the human beings or just your special person... it is deep, it is wide, it is universal.

clever talks delay friendship!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2009-02-14 08:49 AM

Such loyalty, love and devotion....Happy
Valentines Day M..

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2009-02-14 10:33 AM

Such a pleasure to read this one and the "divine seeds" ... what a wonderful analogy to place in this treasure. You stretch and touch the stars in this one.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2009-02-14 01:18 PM

Yes you are , your poem is delightfully Devine

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2009-02-14 03:29 PM

My my, there are so many beautiful expressions of emotion and love in those verses....I loved them all.

Eric

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2009-02-14 04:26 PM

Margherita - I find you are a true romantic, this poem shows it...

BC

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2009-02-14 07:03 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

13 posted 2009-02-14 07:35 PM

nice

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2009-02-15 05:16 AM

Thank you, my dear Poet friends, for the most loving comments you blessed me with.
Hope you had a tender Valentine's Day that made you feel loved!

Love and Joy.
Margherita

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

15 posted 2009-02-15 09:19 PM

My dearest Margherita,

you are the white chocolate
on my strawberry.

Happy Belated Valentines Sweet one.

Richy

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

16 posted 2009-02-15 11:30 PM

This love
so rare
is measured
by every
single breath
we share

Exquisite words my dear, I loved it.

Lindsay

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2009-02-16 09:49 AM

This goes beyond beautiful. *S* WOW!!!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

18 posted 2009-02-17 08:32 AM

Dear Richie, dear Lindsay and dear Ruth, thank you from my heart for your loving replies!
Have a wonderful day, filled with love, joy and laughter!
Love,
Margherita

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

19 posted 2009-02-17 10:22 PM

Margherita, this is an absolutely beautiful poem of love.

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

20 posted 2009-02-17 10:31 PM

Yo Margherita,

Being a divine seed in our enchanted universe is probably close to the truth.

Nice work Hon.

Love Bobby

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

21 posted 2009-02-23 01:09 PM

Thank you, dear Sue and dear Bobby, for your very loving replies.
Love,
Margherita

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

22 posted 2009-02-23 04:32 PM

this is so beautiful!!

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

23 posted 2009-02-23 04:36 PM

This is awesome. Very touching.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

24 posted 2009-02-23 10:57 PM

I must have gotten interrupted the last time that I read this. I thought I had commented on this earlier, but apparently I hadn't. I still find these words intriguing:

"This love
so rare
is measured
by every
single breath
we share"

...here's to a long life of deep breaths...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

25 posted 2009-02-28 08:42 AM

Thank you from my heart, dear Sue, dear Viking and dear Steaven. I enjoyed you loving replies very much.

Have a wonderful week-end!

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

26 posted 2009-03-02 12:43 PM

"divine seeds in this enchanted universe"
Superb write, dear poetess.
Ida

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

27 posted 2009-03-02 10:29 AM

It's beautiful when it happens.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

28 posted 2009-03-03 06:33 PM

Thank you both so much, dear Ida and dear Susan!
Love,
Margherita

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

29 posted 2009-03-09 07:14 PM

Oh this was really pretty!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

30 posted 2009-03-09 07:50 PM

One of your best...back to the top...James

Bill Charles
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Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

31 posted 2009-03-09 10:00 PM

Margherita - a star for this writing, suberb...

BC

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

32 posted 2009-03-10 07:55 AM

ms mar..your love story is enchanting to view as it fills the smile of the sky

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

33 posted 2009-03-10 08:29 PM

Dear GothicCherry, dear James, dear Bill and dear D., thank you for your loving replies.

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