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Vinyl Ottoman Sr
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since 2009-02-12
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0 posted 2009-02-12 07:17 PM


The news falls down
The words all scatter
Headlines scream
“World, what’s the matter...
With you?” With us?
Are we to blame
Just skim the page
It’s all the same
Lines and lines
Of endless peril
Dark and darker
Hope is sterile
Top to bottom
Goes the stream
A flooding,
Disappointing theme:
“Wrong and wrong
And wrong some more...
Murder, crimes
Disease and war”
But fold it up
Put it to rest
Ignore the facts
We can’t digest
Shut our eyes
And just stay numb
Pretend we’re not
What we’ve become

The news falls down
The words all scatter
Headlines scream
But it won’t matter
Another day
Another list
Of vital chances
We have missed
To fix the problems,
Cure the pain,
Erase the scars,
And clean the stain
Of everything
We didn’t do
Of all the problems
We’ve been through
But, no, it reads
Just as before
“Murder, crimes
Disease and war.”
Oh, these horrors
We’ve repeated
Has our goodness...
Been defeated?
Time will tell
And so will we
Paging through
Our history


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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-02-12 07:20 PM


Vinyl Ottoman Sr - it would be great if all the pain and suffering stopped. What a paradise it could be. However, if one looks at the idiots trying to run the country I have to wonder if they are sitting on their brains...

BC

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Gaia
2 posted 2009-02-12 07:20 PM


Put the paper down and go outside, immerse yourself in nature.
Welcome to Pips.

Blood.Wolf
Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54
GA, USA
3 posted 2009-02-12 07:48 PM


Notice that news is always depressing.  Depression sells.  It's human nature (for most of us, anyway).  They do tend to stretch the truth...  Great poem.
nina1522
Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189

4 posted 2009-02-14 10:32 PM


good poem.everyone can connect to this
turtle
Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548
Harbor
5 posted 2009-02-15 12:36 PM


Hi Sr,

Very nicely done. Don't know if I'm ready to sell the farm quite yet though.

turtle

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
6 posted 2009-02-15 01:11 AM


Paging through
Our history

I'm sure to read and page through your history. This is sooo good

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2009-02-18 09:01 AM


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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2009-02-18 01:16 PM


Welcome to PIP, Vinyl. Great first post, hope to see more.
                               Ida

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