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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-02-12 06:53 PM


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Now
The new snow
Falls softly
On all my yesterdays
In winter fields


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gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
1 posted 2009-02-12 07:21 PM


A beautiful thought, sir. I lift my cup to it.

art

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-02-12 08:01 PM


Yo John,

I retired early at 55, and I'm now 72, and plan to live to at least 200.  

It's the wisest thing I ever did for myself.  I've loved it, and plan to continue loving it, writing books, and enjoying being the hood patriarch.

Bobby  

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2009-02-12 11:27 PM


The new snow is falling on my yesterdays too, John. Beautiful way of thinking about it.
                               Ida

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
4 posted 2009-02-12 11:27 PM


I really like your style

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
5 posted 2009-02-13 02:20 PM


I really adore your short poems, you are a master.

yann

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