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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Light streams Through a window At the top of the stairs Beyond green fields Sky meets the sea Blue on blue This is not The world of war Or desire Let young men To either who have Never been there If they need to Go and learn What it has To know Tonight for us There is music Coming from Down the hall A smell Of good food In the evening air The moon moving Slowly over far hills Fireflies dancing Under silver stars . |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
good read -Juju |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a very enjoyable read, like alll verses yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine slice of philosophy, life, and impressionistic imagery! I am particularly fond of the beginning: "Light streams Through a window At the top of the stairs Beyond green fields Sky meets the sea Blue on blue This is not The world of war Or desire" significant applause for this 'penning'! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such "tonights" are what makes days worthwhile. *S* Beautiful work! |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Wandering in the warm nights of summer---I am there, a gleeful boy amid fireflies and stars! Thanks for rekindling the magic---we called them lightening bugs!  art |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the firefly dance. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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