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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-02-12 07:24 AM


we talk sometimes about those other days
when your king was also your knight
you sipped wine by shore lined windows
and it was endless love without winter

today I will whisper southward there
and look in the rain eyed sky for your eyes
to watch you dancing with him again
and to taste of your teardrop jewelry

I will be alone like you are sometimes
watching myself wanting to watch you
when you were fragile in your love slowly
and your lovely was another man's diamond

and maybe we would sit back to back
beside each other's wanting windows
touching fingers to the other's hands
just to be sure we were really dreaming

if only you would ask to keep me company
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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2009-02-12 08:05 AM


watching your windows
catching your eyes
watching me watching you
watching me
shall we dance?

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-02-12 08:08 AM


Reading this terrific poem in a fragile moment makes me want to step into the land beyond forbidden, to find the sparkling beauty your words scatter into my consciousness, like petals of a Spring rose blooming in Winter.

Your beautiful mind never fails to move me, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-02-12 08:49 AM


ms inky..if it is slow song yes...thanks babe


___________

ms mar, thanks lady friend


Raindance
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4 posted 2009-02-12 09:32 AM


Ah, the bittersweet longing, so well expressed, and felt...
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-02-12 09:50 AM


Thanks Rain'
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6 posted 2009-02-12 10:56 AM


Sometimes the only questions asked
are in the eyes
which look out from another window

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-02-12 12:39 PM


ms ali-san..questions are always in the windows and in the innuendos they say, thanks lady
Sunshine
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8 posted 2009-02-12 02:33 PM


when you were fragile in your love slowly
and your lovely was another man's diamond

and maybe we would sit back to back
beside each other's wanting windows

~*~

Ok, today you stole my speechless, too.

Indigo
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9 posted 2009-02-12 05:28 PM


those southward whispers?
be careful what you wish for,
you just might get it.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2009-02-13 06:10 AM


ms sun, thanks special lady..


___________

ms indi...don't tempt me babe...unless you have packed a lunch...thanks hon

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