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Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

0 posted 2009-02-12 06:28 AM

This is intended as a Valentine's Day gift for my beloved in Scotland so please tell me your opinions before I set it to print and post. Thanks guys.

Shadow and light entwine in the evening,
Mournful clouds with a lovers moon,
Twilight passion play on a dark stage
Come take my hand, grant me this boon.

Follow me through the silver fir trees
Threads of starlight light our path,
A breathless adventure through spring woods
You tilt your head and gaily laugh.

Luna mercury from the shrouded heavens
Softly plays upon your face,
Illuminating a seraphic visage,
I’m lost in love as we embrace.

As shadow and light we intertwine
Within this sacred glade we’ll stay
On lavender scented bracken stages
Enact our twilight passion play.

Dedicated to Shannon Rose Kelly, my beloved.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (02-17-2009 07:55 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-02-12 08:38 AM

Oh, Luke, I love it, as surely your Shannon will love it too!

And I also adore the three new words I learned: boon, glade, bracken ... such romantic scenery!!

A beautiful Valentine, no doubt!

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2009-02-12 06:49 PM

"Follow me through the silver fir trees
Threads of starlight light our path,
A breathless adventure through spring woods
You tilt your head and gaily laugh."

Very romantic, Luke. Send it, for it reads straight from the heart.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2009-02-18 02:23 PM

I hope you sent this, Luke. I haven't been on the site for a few days so I just read it and know that Shannon would love it.
Ida

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

4 posted 2009-02-18 10:57 PM

Oh, I think your sweetheart will love this poem. I think you should send it.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2009-02-19 04:02 PM

i very rarely like rhyming poetry but this has good thoughtful content in it

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