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Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-02-11 09:45 AM


Big fat Butch,
and his equally corpulent uncle,
along with skinny Wawa,
Muck,
and Felix
are all gathered around
Madame Queens’s door.  

Butch is banging on the door.  

As soon as the Queen opens the door,
the gang pushes right past her.

"Get out of the way
you ugly old bag!"  

They storm through the brothel,
pushing clients,
and staff out of the way.

They know where the Queen’s
holding Bones captive.  

They break through the door.  

Of course Bones is standing there naked.  
The gang knew he would be,
so they have brought along
a set of Bones clothes
that they were able to coerce
Mom into giving them.  

They get Bones all dressed-up nice.  

Bones has a score to settle
with Madame Queen.  
He kicks her in the shins,
and generally roughs her up
on the way out.  

It’s been just another successful mission
well carried out by the gang.

Bobby

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gilead
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1 posted 2009-02-11 12:16 PM


I was never in a gang of this kind, but I was involved sometimes as an arbitrator in disputes---little idiot, would be lawyer type, but respected by all sides. Hey, it's a wonder Bones survived, but he's resilient and resourceful.

Quite an episode---whew!

art

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-02-11 12:32 PM


Yo Art,

Good for you buddy.  Every gang needs a lawyer type.  

All street gangs are based on mutual protection of its members.

Bobby

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2009-02-11 03:52 PM


good

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-02-11 05:12 PM


Thanks dear Juju,

For your kind support of Bones and the gang--they appreciate it.

Love Bobby

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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5 posted 2009-02-11 06:54 PM


I'm so glad to see someone finally go out of their way for Bones. I was worried that he'd live and die alone, but you never know when old friends can lend a helping hand.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2009-02-11 06:59 PM


Thanks Suncleaver,

Yes, Bones is doing very well, surrounded by family and friends.  Thanks for your concern.

Bobby

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2009-02-12 03:26 PM


Alright! Thanks to the gang.

Don't blame Bones for roughing up the Madame after all look what she's done to him.

Sometimes I get busy and I miss these Bobby but as a rule I try and tune in on the Bones saga as sad as it is it becomes an escape from wine and roses. A good head shake is what I get out of it.
You deliver it well, not too wordy and flowery but stimulating the thought process with leading scenes.

I think this should be a broadway musical....Seriously! I do!

Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-02-12 03:36 PM


Thanks Eric,

For your kind word.  Bones on Broadway, now there's a thought.

Bobby

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