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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-02-10 04:10 PM


       Reflection

the moon is too far
our fears too close

between …

all eternity reflects
in a drop of dew

    --- b. e. adams (2/10/2009)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2009-02-10 04:17 PM


Oh, do I have a photo for you....

will add soon to this beauty!




Blood.Wolf
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2 posted 2009-02-10 05:04 PM


Aaw... beautiful.  Quite a heavy dose of philosophy for such a small poem.  I guess that's what makes it amazing.
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3 posted 2009-02-10 08:51 PM


Powerful minimalistic imagery!
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4 posted 2009-02-10 10:02 PM


Astonishing, a spherical dewdrop, capturing and reflecting all eternity! I'm going to zip my lip and just meditate on this!

art

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5 posted 2009-02-10 10:59 PM


This is .. you left me speechless in a good way.  That's all I am gonna say.

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6 posted 2009-02-11 04:21 AM


Love the way your mind works, Bruce.
                                 Ida

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