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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-02-10 07:50 AM


my mind was in your worshiping circle
and your coin was bronze with a golden middle
I didn't care if I had your head or heart
when your edges were mothing to my candle

you were quiet in your eyes there
as we wet each other's lips with stories
and then wanted to blot the sheen
with another kiss colored eternity

you showed me your most tender place then
one that only love could enter and touch
you hid it again ladylike, like temptation
and wondered in your eyes if I would remember

how the butterfly of you burned my wings
_____________

daark (forbidden)

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-10-2009 09:40 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2009-02-10 09:15 AM


Smiling...
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-02-10 09:40 AM


ms sun...when the sun smiles the earth tingles, thanks ms
Margherita
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3 posted 2009-02-10 11:35 AM


A butterfly named temptation, success seems guaranteed. But I do hope your singed wings grow back to their full splendor.

You handle fire well, dear D.! This exudes fascination.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-02-10 01:06 PM


ms mar...I am blessed that I never have to fly...only ride very fast..thanks lady!!
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5 posted 2009-02-10 04:02 PM


in the chrysalis
there is darkness, warmth and peace
yet she emerges.

You're writing is stellar, D. Makes me long to leave incandescent trails of color on your skin.

Indigo

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6 posted 2009-02-11 05:45 AM


ms indi...

my skin awaits the flattery
of your tattoos..thanks babe

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7 posted 2009-02-15 09:42 PM


Scorchingly beautiful.
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2009-02-16 06:10 AM


thanks ms ali-san
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