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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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It was the fringe before days where, I first felt you. An occasion before place, or while. Wandering, through the seed of dim, we met, in that void between nothing, and beginning. Beyond, the solitary point, in the bottommost beat, before sudden was conceived; nor moment, had the courage, to be born. Against a fire of thrust, came the light from your scream, as our kiss, became provenance, shattering gravities of nil, and epochs of time and event. As I filled you with origin, your polestar, overflowing with lives, and genesis, an eruption, of matter, and mystery, spirit, and dawn, the auspicious deliverance of flood, and miracle, the torrid surrender, of emergence, and rapture. Stay with me, through this brief of eons. Meld with me, our component, of entirety. Share with me, this liquor of dream and being. From bang to cessation, from aura to blind, we are, the first embrace, the final tear, the, poem, before words. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Richy, what an incredible emotional big bang you have created here! Such a passionate write, with no less than Universe involved! Fantastic! Love, Margherita  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent write, Rich. This is a keeper. I think this is your best yet. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! excellent!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yet another  !!!"we met, in that void between nothing, and beginning." ~ and oh, how glorious those new beginnings can be!   Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a lovely way of weaving the words on the surface and beneath with your special touch |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The poem before words... Beautiful work, my friend. *S* And yes... somethings ARE... even before they get to be. *S* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Richy - don't know how I missed this great write, but I found it. You're a master of words, and write most enjoyable poetry... BC |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Richy... this is just so...... beautiful.. as beautiful as you.. thank you for sharing your heart with us .......... love and RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You have such a wonderful way with words that do embrace the heart Hope |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Richy, You did it again. You made me fan myself as I was reading. This is a keeper. A |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Margy! Glad you liked it! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I appreciate that Ida, thanks for stopping by! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hey Dixie, howya been?! I hope all is well with you and yours! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Linda, what can I say, you're beautiful! Richy |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks so much Michele. You are such a big inspiration to me! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Suthern, they really are aren't they. Thank you my dear! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Bill, from one romantic to another, I appreciate that, alot! Thanks friend! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sweet Roniece, have I told you lately how lovely you truly are? Well you are, inside and out! Richy |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Hope, you're a treasure! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank so much dear Alison. I'm just trying to help you cut back on your heating bill this winter. So nice to hear from you again! Richy |
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