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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2009-02-09 10:13 PM


August sixteenth was the last time
The last time I saw your eyes stare my way
The love I saw hasn’t gone away
The dream I’ve been having
Is it going to come true?
There’s nothing I can do
There were so many years for this night
The stars keep you hanging in my arms
How many more can we expect?
"You’re the beauty of the neighborhood"
You give me the sweet taste of life
The reason to live
You keep me looking for life
The reasons I could give to get away
You’re the girl that keeps me wondering away
The blue sky keeps me looking for you
The sunset has left letting the moon rise
The lesson you taught is more than anything i want
The girl behind these words is you


[This message has been edited by gdcod2player (02-10-2009 11:45 PM).]

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2009-02-09 10:15 PM


Lovely

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Blood.Wolf
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since 2009-02-09
Posts 54
GA, USA
2 posted 2009-02-09 10:24 PM


Beautiful.  I can't wait to see waht it looks like when it's completed!
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2009-02-10 10:17 AM


Nice finish.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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