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Rick Mordecon
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since 2009-02-05
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0 posted 2009-02-09 08:47 PM




After

After all. After everything comes.
After motion stops. After lies and wishes.
After all has been said and done.
Gone the hallowed ground.
By our touch, in our time.


The rain comes. After.
The past is ruined. After.
Worlds are rescued. After.
Simple things. After.

Revolution has incarnation. After.
After the small are gone, the sorry forgiven, faith fulfilled.
After all this, blossomed days, covered minutes., creation, myth and fable.
Alone. After.



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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2009-02-10 01:32 AM


interesting

gave me kind of a sad feeling though I'm not sure it was intended to


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-02-10 01:21 PM


Hello, Rick! ~ and what, praytell, comes after "AFTER"?

Ah, yes, "everything" ~ and nothing.

A very intriguing write to wrap my mind around! I like that!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,
EA



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