Wishing On Stars...Dreaming On Rainbows (a duet near and dear to my heart with Marge)

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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0 posted 2009-02-09 08:47 PM

Wishing On Stars ... Dreaming On Rainbows
Gentle Spirit & Marge Tindal

Held within the silence of the night
dreams are born under moonlights' glow
Hopes are wished upon distant star
Just one wish, could you please bestow?

Let me dance on Rainbow colors
across the Milky Way tonight
Awakening to a dream come true
on early morn of light~

Twirl me upon the winds of tomorrow
carry my dreams to distant galaxy
As I drift on eternity's moonbeams
allow my dreams to become reality~

Set me down in joyous surround
in the land where visions have no end
Let me know that I have found
peace in serenity's glen~

Upon a star I'm forever wishing
thoughts carried on celestial streams
Eternal dance 'cross kaleidoscopic hues
in search of rainbow's arc of dreams~

Dear Lady, you are missed. Fly high, m'friend.

Blood.Wolf
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since 2009-02-09

Posts 54
GA, USA

1 posted 2009-02-09 09:08 PM

Beautiful. I find it haunting, and I'm not sure if you meant it that way. Either way, it seems as if it could be woven into song. Those would make beautiful lyrics.

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

2 posted 2009-02-09 09:29 PM

Thank you Gentle Spirit for posting this. I miss Marge so very much. This is so beautiful.

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

3 posted 2009-02-09 11:17 PM

I can only agree. Special, very.

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

4 posted 2009-02-09 11:54 PM

Oh, yes! The nature Marge loved! Lovely tribute.

God bless,
Rae

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2009-02-10 01:37 AM

thank you for sharing this

I wish I could have done a duet with her.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2009-02-10 02:52 AM

What a truly beautiful poem, Donna.
Ida

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2009-02-10 04:12 AM

Absolutely beautiful!

Eric

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2009-02-10 05:41 AM

Thank you each for sharing a few moments to remember her with me. This was one of the first duets I had ever written, possibly even the first. Marge, being the gracious lady that she was, made it so easy and made me feel so at ease when we wrote this way back when...

Thank you all. Hugs and peace ~D

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2009-02-10 10:38 AM

Dear Donna, thank you for sharing this delightful duet you had written with dear Marge. I would say she is in her element now and enjoys it.
Though we miss her, we must remember in the same time how blessed we are to have her dance in our memories.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

10 posted 2009-02-10 01:31 PM

Gentle Spirited One, this de'Light'ful duet, touches me deeply. As Margherita has imparted, Marge is in her element now. I'm so pleased that you brought this wonderful collaboration back into the light. Your pens blend so beautifully.

Love, Stars, and Rainbows,
Linda

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2009-02-10 01:48 PM

your duet was light and lovely
her spirit will sustain through such
beautifully penned thoughts

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

12 posted 2009-02-10 04:36 PM

Daughter, she's smiling.

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

13 posted 2009-02-10 09:16 PM

It is a beautiful post Donna and thank you for sharing this work of art, Take a bow my dear.

Lindsay

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2009-02-13 10:10 AM

I read this right after you posted it, but didn't have a chance to respond. But now I thank you for sharing this beauty with us again... in doing so, you've shared so much more than words. *S*

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