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Silence Within
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Silence Within |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Silence Within Next time when I fall in love I will some how survive A nuclear holocaust And this man I'll love will be As mutated and sheltered As the woman I've become Metaphorical equals We'll hold hands in the silence Nothing will need to be said Juju -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, Now that's looking into the future. One never knows. Bobby |
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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
Wow seems like you have deep thoughts I dont know but would like to read more of your work |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Very good Juju John PS http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2R69nV4HOaE&feature=related . |
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shelerella75 Member
since 2009-01-30
Posts 58 |
what emotion you inspire! I don't know if this is actually a sad poem or a wonderfully hopeful one. I loved the brevity of its poignancy! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
"Next time when I fall in love I will some how survive" I thought so too and yet I did not Very nice write! The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. [This message has been edited by HelmutB (02-10-2009 10:36 PM).] |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
It was a lovely post JuJu, so much enjoyed my dear. Thank you. Lindsay |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Very interesting---an existential consciousness of being a metaphor! I don't think I've ever encountered this idea in all my years. Great write--- art |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks for this Juju. Been feeling a little like this myself lately. Sometimes more is felt from what we don't say. Richy  |
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