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The Hawk
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The Hawk |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
The noble Hawk flies high into the air. Its grace cannot be matched when it takes flight. Even the Eagles that rule the sky must stare, For birds like them share not grace, only might. When in the air, the Hawk glows bright with strength; His power seems to radiate like suns’. He soars over the mountains, and at length, His strength will radiate from his loved ones. The Hawk contains within a sense of ire, As if he has lost his happiness, too. Not only is there ire, but there is fire Within, burning for something lost through flu. While power is one thing that Hawk does lack, His endless grace shows Eagle as a quack! Poetry... such a beautiful thing. Perhaps the most passionate and beautiful of all literature... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The eagles might disagree with you but I enjoyed your first post here. Welcome to Pip place, I hope you will enjoy your time here. |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
Thank you. Your warm welcome is very appreciated. =3 |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I do like your work very much. Birds of Prey are my favorite subject for my Oil and Pencil Art. You described them well. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One of my own writes, that of a hawk. Welcome to Passions, Blood Wolf. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The hawk is a majestic creature, unlike any other of the sky or the earth. ;0 |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
Thanks so much, guys! Especially for the support. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding first post! Welcome! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip, dear Jonathan! Your first entry is beautifully written and though I feel both Hawk and Eagle are spectacular beings, I enjoyed your passionate write. Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Jonathan.. welcome to our pages blue.. I enjoyed your gifting to us immensely love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
I try to write about what interests me so it won't bore the readers. xP Glad to see it worked. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Well, someone has to make a statement about the grace of the eagles! They fly on the jetstream and they glide high above clouds Eagles soar over cresting waves and make America proud Well, that's the best I can do off the top of my head. I enjoyed your poem and love Hawks too. I just had to speak up for Eagles - gotta go with the underdog bird, you know. Enjoyed and welcome to PiP. Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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