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Roaring out
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Roaring out |
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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
Today I’ve learned more about you What color your eyes turn in the sun’s first rays The songs you love to play The words that felt so real Echoing with a meaning They gave me a drive to find you The reason I seem to be lost now The reason I can’t find you It’s not my fault no one knows I exist I’m just an imaginary wall with to many excuses Is it possible for any help? Or is this the last chance to find you? So many reasons I can’t give because they seem to be meaningless You seem to really love old Jim K. The heart ache it gives me won’t go away My blood keeps roaring out my veins The cold of the night has filled me Without the moon I have no light The guide I needed was never lit The torch you gave me hasn’t went out I’ll find you even if it takes an eternity |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
oh! I love this poem!!! Juju -Juju |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Today I’ve learned more about you What color your eyes turn in the sun’s first rays The songs you love to play The words that felt so real" ~ Strong powers of observation make for a good poet ~ and a good romantic partner!  EA |
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Jax Nova Junior Member
since 2009-02-04
Posts 20OK |
I like it.  Very inventive and intriguing. |
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