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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England

0 posted 2009-02-09 04:31 PM


Hyperion shed your golden tears
And wash away my grief
A light to burn away my fears
Rekindle my belief

In everything that’s good and pure
Under eternal sun
Blessed be the one who sees
The joining has begun

Long I’ve travelled east to west
Under your warming rays
The trials of my bitter nights
Vindicated by your days

Hyperion shine forever more
I shall not walk alone
Father of gods flesh and blood
Light my way back home

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-02-09 04:35 PM


Suncleaver - and the way back home has been lit by this touching poem...

BC

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-02-09 06:30 PM


Wonderful write, dear Luke. Beautiful message and captivating rhythm.

Love,
Margherita

gilead
Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
3 posted 2009-02-09 06:51 PM


Superbly crafted, with tasteful, effective rhyme, and tender feeling crowned with hope!

A very inspiring reading, Sir.

art

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