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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-02-09 10:51 AM


Bones tries the door,
Yes, believe it or not,
Bones does get to spend
some free time
sitting and thinking.

Bones always was the deep one.
no,
he can’t open it.  

That leaves Bones
with a very empty feeling
in the pit of his stomach.  

He doesn’t like that at all.  

He goes and sits down on the stool
in the corner of the hot, humid,
brightly lit room.  

Bones is naked,
and sweating from the heat.  

Suddenly, he door flies open.  
In walks a man.  
He’s a rough looking guy.  
The door slams shut.  

Bones gets to his feet,
and cowers in a corner
of the hot,
brightly lit room.  

The man sits on the stool,
and tells Bones not to be afraid.

“Hello Bones, how are you tonight?”

“I’m okay.  
How come you know my name?”

“How long have you been here
in this room?”

“I just got here Mister.”

“I’m Butch’s uncle,
he told me you might be here.”

“Yeah, okay.”

“I’ll be back with the guys
to get you out of here.  

Now, I want you to scream
long and loud.  

We want to make this
sound good, and real.”

Bones has no trouble with that one.

Bobby


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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
1 posted 2009-02-09 11:10 AM


He escapes?  I hope he does.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-02-09 11:12 AM


I hesitated to read this one, but I am glad for the relief coming from the end of this reality write, dear Bobby.

It makes me think of today's child abuse, especially in Asia by tourists with no ethic rules. There are some courageous people fighting against this plague, trying to do what this man in your poem did for Bones.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2009-02-09 01:01 PM


Thanks dear Juju,

Yes, he will escape.  Help is on the way.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-02-09 01:03 PM


Thanks dear Margherita,

Yes, what you say is true.  It happens right here in my beloved hood.

Help for Bones is on the way.

Love Bobby

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
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5 posted 2009-02-09 02:35 PM


The environment that Bones is in can't be endured by the faint of heart. I sense that Bones will not be trapped by anything for too long; he is smart, a survivor.

art

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2009-02-09 02:48 PM


Thanks Art,

Help for Bones is on the way.  

Thanks for your kind words concerning Bones.

Bobby

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2009-02-09 08:31 PM


I was also hesitant to read this one but I am also glad to read of the relief.

Life can be so unkind sometimes.

Good work Bobby you set the scenes so well.

Eric

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
8 posted 2009-02-09 08:45 PM


I'm so glad to see some help on the way for Bones. He needs this break, badly.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
9 posted 2009-02-09 09:30 PM


Thanks Eric,

Yes, life can be very unkind.

Help for Bones is on the way.  Butch's uncle is one of many good guys.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 posted 2009-02-09 09:32 PM


Thanks Suncleaver,

Yes, thank heavens help is on the way for Bones.

Stay tuned.

Bobby

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