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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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Stafford England

0 posted 2009-02-08 06:53 PM


Under starlit skies by sighing tides
Lies an angel in the sand
She’s sculpted fine in every line
By two lover’s hands

Witness to a secret promise
Of eternity kept true
What she’s heard are lover’s words
Spoken from me to you

As we lay down upon the ground
The angel softly sighs
She starts to sing she spreads her wings
And bears us to the sky

Two hearts made one as we’ve begun
A journey to the soul
Of true love gifted from above
Where broken become whole

At dawns first rays by break of day
Her embrace we depart
By passion’s dance of pure romance
We have quickened her heart


Dedicated to Shannon, my beloved.


Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
1 posted 2009-02-08 07:23 PM


That is so so beautiful, I can see as to why it is in your heart.

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2009-02-09 05:42 PM


Fine romantic writing...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2009-02-09 07:07 PM


Wow, you are quite the romantic, dear Luke. Another tender and absolutely beautiful poem for your dear Shannon.

Love,
Margherita

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
4 posted 2009-02-09 07:35 PM


A wonderful dedication, Suncleaver, a monument built upon the boundless shore, that the tides of time can't wash away!

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