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mein or meree thanhai
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since 2009-02-01
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0 posted 2009-02-06 04:20 PM



first i call her 'you'
then we call ourself  'us'
now i call her 'my'

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gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
1 posted 2009-02-06 05:35 PM


Ah, I love the way this evolves!

Thank you for the poem---

art

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-02-06 08:03 PM


Clever poem.
         Ida

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2009-02-07 05:21 PM




Smiling with this.

Enjoyed!

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
4 posted 2009-02-08 07:06 PM


Indeed you do.........I do call my.........one.
Well done

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  


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