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Jax Nova
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since 2009-02-04
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0 posted 2009-02-05 11:00 AM



"The Sound Of Fear"

Pumping, Pounding,
Thumping, Sounding.

Run for fear and,
Fast for flight.

Drums in the deep,
Ever abounding.

Afraid to face it,
Afraid to fight.

Stop, Now!
Stay your fear!

Take a stand,
Make it here!



Pumping, Pounding,
Thumping, Sounding.

The sound of fear,
Draws ever near.

Drums in the deep,
Ever abounding.

Turn to battle,
Face your fear.

Victory!
The shout goes out.

Victory!
The frail cry.

Victory...
Is ever nigh


© Copyright 2009 Jason Hein - All Rights Reserved
Boshii2
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since 2009-02-01
Posts 146

1 posted 2009-02-05 01:26 PM


Pumping Pounding
Thumping Sounding
I hate that
Alone
In the car park,at  night !


I ran with you.  Enjoyed .Boshii2

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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2 posted 2009-02-05 06:00 PM


Well rendered!

Fear it is!

Better breathe quietly...

Love,
Margherita

Jax Nova
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since 2009-02-04
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3 posted 2009-02-05 07:26 PM


Thanks both for the comments. Glad you liked it.
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