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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-02-05 12:05 PM

It is easy
for me to love you,
from halfway across
ten thousand lakes.

You can't protest
a love
if we both pretend
it does not exist.

Can't tell me
you're unimpressed
with how I remember
the way your hair
falls just so,
when you drink from public fountains.

Five thousand lakes
can protect me
from what you might say.
Can protect me
from a puzzled look
on an uninterested face.

______________________________________________
The Sadie Series.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-02-05 12:08 PM

Yo Paul,

You treat that girl right, and she'll treat you right.

Bobby

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-02-05 12:42 PM

Sometimes it's just that easy.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Boshii2
Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 146

3 posted 2009-02-05 12:29 PM

Delightful,Vik.I am such in awe.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-02-05 01:15 PM

Thanks much, Boshii!

-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (02-06-2009 09:28 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2009-02-05 02:10 PM

*whew* fanning self

this is HOT!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

6 posted 2009-02-05 03:24 PM

Thanks for the kind words.

=]

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-02-05 06:21 PM

Very captivating, many great lines.

Instead of swimming you might decide to fly ... at lightspeed!

Love,
Margherita

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2009-02-06 12:22 PM

this is so good...it carries the reader away...you see it...you really see it...that one leaves a footprint in my mind...nicely, nicely done...I'm gonna leave for a moment and press re-play...thank you for sharing this

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

9 posted 2009-02-06 12:39 PM

Thanks very much. I appreciate the kind words, I needed them tonight.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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