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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Everything I don't believe in true love If I did, then I would ache And watch everything go Just like dandelion seeds Entrained by treacherous winds -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, This is a cute poem Hon. Love Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Yeah, everything seems to be blowing in the wind. If we want to take a chance, I guess we have to reach out, touch something, and maybe it will resonate with the heart. Very nice poem; I like its simplicity. art |
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Jax Nova Junior Member
since 2009-02-04
Posts 20OK |
Like the poem.  It's short and to the point which often can be a good thing, but honestly in this particular case I was wanting it to go on a little longer... which can also be a good thing. The old moto "Don't leave them wanting one less, but one more" *thumbs up* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That just about sums it up. Nicely though I must say. Take care Eric |
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