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Bladecatcher Junior Member
since 2008-11-25
Posts 15 |
Our prayers must patter down Upon the House of God Like the raindrops of A dreary Sunday shower Plummeting downward with desperate alacrity And splattering from the inertia While God himself Settles into slumber Satisfied with the answer His roof gives to raindrops |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bladecatcher, Roofs that don't lead are the cat's meow. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Interesting poetic thoughts, well expressed. Smiles for Bobby's reply! Love, Margherita |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Bladecatcher - It must be comforting to know that even when HE sleeps, prayers still come. Very nice work Bladecatcher. Namyh |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great arrangement of thoughts in perspective. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
... "Like the raindrops of A dreary Sunday shower" ~ Great simile!   EA |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"A dreary Sunday shower Plummeting downward with desperate alacrity" ...nice description of a weekend rain...welcome to PiP |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Nice -Juju |
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