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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-02-03 03:05 PM



Morning spins regret
as kisses slip
beneath the twilight snow
the skies surmise
in thought and premonition
what clearly ills the
the grungy stands of night
glued shut, romance thrice
etched, in lusted frenzy
stumps of smoking ash
underaged merlot
and stockings shed
a color palette
freshly spills with tattered tales

crumpled in postmodern fallout
summer's shrunken daisies
falter in the unexpected
both of snows and courtships
never written in prominance
never meant to weather
hence the pause between
the gifts and the mourning
porridge of whatever


with slipping trinkets
of remember

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-04-2009 10:04 PM).]

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-02-03 05:29 PM


The more I read it the more it unravels its mighty charm. You have created such an intense atmosphere, dear Michele Poetess.

Btw. did I tell you that your book has arrived finally and I cherish it greatly. It is filled with outstanding creations!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
2 posted 2009-02-03 11:42 PM


Wonderful write!  
1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2009-02-04 01:33 AM


Book?
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-02-04 02:05 AM


Like Margherita ~ I too have enjoyed your book! It is wonderful to have a collection of your poetic thoughts!

With this poem, you have created the intoxicating atmosphere so vividly, that I almost feel like a voyeur!

There's liquid gold in your pen!


Linda

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2009-02-04 08:13 AM


Enjoyed the picture painted here.

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