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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-02-03 01:18 PM


Broken Hearts Lane

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2009-02-03 01:22 PM


interesting mix of graphics and poetic imagery!


2islander2
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2 posted 2009-02-03 01:49 PM


Hi Bill, the mix of words and photos make a masterpiece, this is beautiful to look and to read....I will add this one to my favourites....

have a nice day


yann

Marc-Andre
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3 posted 2009-02-03 09:46 PM


Bill, a beautiful writ, as always.

Mark

amusemi
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4 posted 2009-02-03 11:15 PM


Sometimes that's all you can do, just walk away...stunning write and gorgeous picture display.     kat
LindsayP
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5 posted 2009-02-03 11:32 PM



Bill that is a sad poem but so well put together, It was a joy to read, well done.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-02-04 02:18 AM


My gosh, Bill, you are getting VERY good at selecting and posting, graphics to beautifully present your tender words of love. Always a treat to behold!


Linda

Margherita
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7 posted 2009-02-04 05:51 AM


Dear Bill, I am really amazed at your creative skills here and conquered by your poignant words.

So beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Oklahoma Rose
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8 posted 2009-02-04 07:15 AM


Bill, your presentations and words are beautiful. I've been down "Broken Hearts Lane". It seems it takes so long to mend a broken heart. But, I think I finally got there.
viking_metal
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9 posted 2009-02-04 09:38 AM


Enjoyed.


-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-02-04 11:47 AM


Yo Bill,

This is a heavy combination of pictures and poem.

Bobby

ethome
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11 posted 2009-02-04 05:09 PM


Bill

That is so sad but in such a beautiful way explaining life as it can be sometimes.

Eric

Ariana
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12 posted 2009-02-05 10:45 AM


Bill
I can feel the sadness in the words and the emotions on "looking back".  You are getting really good with the graphics too.  Overall - job well done and I enjoyed the total picture.

Ariana

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13 posted 2009-02-06 11:26 AM


Beautiful presentation... words and photos are perfectcomplement!
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14 posted 2009-02-06 11:33 AM


Bill I really enjoyed your poem. It was beautiful, yet sad. I especailly love the graphics


Bill Charles
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15 posted 2009-02-06 01:07 PM


To All: thank you for your gracious replies to this writing. I'm glad I can touch you with words from my pen and heart... Thank you all again...

BC

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