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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-02-03 08:35 AM



Am I Such A Failure

Who am i kidding! I know that i can't write the words
I think I can; and I put them together
But I know that they are nothing
They mean nothing but they matter,

What was I thinking of
Why did I think I could?
To me words are meaningless
I am a failure to ever think I should

This is not what I am meant to be doing
All my life I failed in the things that I try to do
So this is just one more failure
Add this to my list long over due,

Who am I to know the reason?
What is my purpose in this sad place?
Did I ever have all that I wanted
Yes I did! as soon as I saw loves face,

Annie
21-12-2008

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Marc-Andre
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since 2008-12-07
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1 posted 2009-02-03 08:42 AM


Annie, I hope this doesn't reflect your true emotions. There are people here, including myself, that enjoy your verse. I do feel the same at times, luckily I've got my girlfriend talking sense into me at such times. Have a marvelous day! Mark
Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
2 posted 2009-02-03 09:10 AM


Thank you Mark
I guess it all boils down to frustration at times,
especially if you live alone as i do and you start to think of things,
I sometimes feel better when i have written the frustration out

Marc-Andre
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since 2008-12-07
Posts 501

3 posted 2009-02-03 09:56 AM


Well, Annie, the good thing is that you write about it. You keep exploring your soul, and you keep writing. That, in itself, is already very good. It's also good that you vent this in beautiful poetry; God knows what some people refuge into...Keep writing! Mark
Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
4 posted 2009-02-03 12:57 PM


Thank you Mark i will
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