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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-02-03 07:45 AM




Determined I Shall Be

Keeping myself optimistic
Each day begins anew
Looking on the bright side
That's what I had to do

Erasing negative thoughts
So doubts will dissapear
In knowing I have patience
I continued to persevere

Persistance always helps
In using determination
I'm never one for giving up
Whatever the situation

In believing all is possible
That is so true of me
Everyday I remind myself
Determined I shall be


HopeĀ©2009


© Copyright 2009 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
1 posted 2009-02-03 08:04 AM


I liked this one. moves beautifully through the mind,
Excellently written...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-02-03 10:08 AM


Very wise message in this beautiful write, dear Hope!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
3 posted 2009-02-03 11:41 PM


Great wisdom in this...enjoyed.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-02-04 02:12 AM


High Hope

An excellent reminder for us all to look on the bright side of life!
Your smile ~ begets smiles! Your poems always
touch me. Your own beauty comes shining through your poetry.

Love 'n a hug,
Linda

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
Posts 988

5 posted 2009-02-04 05:54 PM


HopeS - That's the spirit. In today's world, determination is a big asset. Thanks for reminding us with your poetic upliftment to use it. Very well done and inspirational. Namyh
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2009-02-05 01:22 PM


Very wise, Hope.
           Ida

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2009-02-05 02:08 PM


go girl!
WTBAKELAR
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since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089
Utah, USA
8 posted 2009-02-05 02:25 PM


Hope, this is such a simple yet deep and thoughtful expression of determination. I loved it.

I would like to send it to my Sister-in-Law. I think she would get a lot out of it.

WT.

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