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passing shadows
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0 posted 2009-02-03 02:05 AM



I look out, ungratefully,
upon the frozen earth,
I tisk, "so this is my life"
and I wonder what it's worth.
The sun shining into the room
should be a sign of some rebirth,
I made it through the icy night
with mostly fortitude and girth.

A yearning comes over me
as the ice breaks the trees,
"God, tell me you have something more
in store for my life, please?"

Mama would tell me I got love
and that's all I should ever need,
a single-wide in the middle of cows
and a garden that provides us feed-
a bed, pillow, a dog and cat,
and all the books I could ever read.

I long to feel happiness in the sun...
God, please take away my greed.


© Copyright 2009 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-02-03 03:52 AM


Dear Dixie, it's nice to read you, even though you have written a melancholic piece. We are part of immensity and though we lack nothing there is always something in us that yearns for the Whole. It is quite comprehensible. But as you pray, it means you are conscious of having reason for gratitude... and God knows.
Enjoy and live the slow awakening to Spring. We need to learn to BE and to ENJOY BEING... then we LIVE in gratitude.

Intense write.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2009-02-03 06:09 PM


Hi Dixie!!!

In the desert, poeple want the rain.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

3 posted 2009-02-03 09:14 PM


to breathe is to sigh in the face of God...to truly live is to sigh deeply...
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