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Open Poetry #44

reclus(iv)e

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2009-02-03 01:23 AM

             o
             go
             ahead
             be reclusive
             it is only an adjective
             just a modification of you
             but we know all about
             risks you'll take
             what it costs
             what you can gain
             and what you will lose if
             we pause and let you become a noun

             if you haven't been there be advised
             the back wall of the cave
             will be dim
             damp
             and cold
             but the eyes will
             see much deeper into the dark
             see things others have quickly walked by

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-02-03 04:08 AM

Dear Krawdad, this is very impressive. And it holds truth.

Love,
Margherita

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2009-02-03 04:14 AM

You...have always been lovely.

smile...

I once made a Mother Goose shadow puppet, simply by bending my hand just so, while wearing a long-sleeved laced-edge nightie.

*wink*