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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2009-02-02 08:23 AM


beyond the valley of whispering walkers
there are shadows there wearing trees
and so they speak of the amiga woman
how she is the morning in sky shimmers

they talk of her laughter as a river
bringing life to the stones that sleep
how she leans over them as children
and presses her breasts to their chill

she is the maker of moan song medicine
from her eyes come the love waters
and she wets her fingers in saliva
to write sooth sounds on statue mouths

tomorrows are the arrows of her quivering
her bow seeks the hands of a gentle warrior
to bend her beyond her familiar seclusion
and guide her beyond the echoes of forbidden

beyond the valley of whispering walkers


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daark  (circle of palms series)


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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
1 posted 2009-02-02 08:42 AM


shes quite the lady in your moment of hard rock and wet dreams of lava
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-02-02 09:03 AM


ms inki..oh my, was it that obvious?  thanks lady friend!!
Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2009-02-02 11:34 AM


quote:
they talk of her laughter as a river
bringing life to the stones that sleep
how she leans over them as children
and presses her breasts to their chill



Totally awesome, dear D.!

This wants to be read more than once of course. Such magic in your play of words.

Love,
Margherita

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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4 posted 2009-02-02 11:35 AM


Mahvelous dahling...one of your best.  Love this...kat
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
5 posted 2009-02-02 12:07 PM


ms mar, thanks lady!!  you always smile me
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ms muse..thank you for the sleeveless tease of your eyes..

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