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Baring My Soul
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Baring My Soul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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 Artist: Alan Ayers Baring My Soul by Linda L. Dowd I lay bare my soul before you ~ in all humility and without pretence. My eyes behold none other than you who claims to love me so. Pride oft goes before a fall and I am falling into a pool of bottomless devotion. I shall be yours alone as you are mine. I am a part of you, ~ and you are of me. As you breathe ~ so breathe I, and forever we shall be ~ as one. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (01-31-2009 11:13 PM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Linda, That always works, and it's the way it should be. Love Bobby |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sweet and so romantic!  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Those romantic words are a definite boomerang my dear Linda. Top accolades to you. Love Lindsay |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine Romanticism! a pleasure to read!! |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Linda this is a very beautiful, romantic poem. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
That's what they always told me. I hope it works for you. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - Whew, this is very romantic, I love it... BC |
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AlexG Junior Member
since 2009-01-31
Posts 10 |
this was a very romantic poem. I'm not usually into this type of poetry, but you did it quite nicly and I enjoyed it, nice job... |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I really enjoyed the romanticism and the imagery of unconditional love in this poem. Nice one EA  Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Linda, ... and such a lovely soul you have to bare, my friend. You are lovely as are your poems. Alison |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, very romantic, dear Linda, but I feel our world isn't perfect enough yet for such unconditional and complete love. Perhaps it's getting there which may account for all the changes. Enjoyed as usual.  Helen |
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shelerella75 Member
since 2009-01-30
Posts 58 |
this is so lovely. what a perfect wedding gift! |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Gorgeous!!!...kat |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A delightful example of a giving soul, dear Angelo Terrestre. This is very captivating and indeed it sounds as a wonderful commitment. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you all for your loving replies! ~ Sending love and kisses to all!  Love & Light  Linda  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And the sight is beautiful... *S* This is lovely, my friend... soft and romantic perfection! *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Romance divine and you have read enough of mine to know how much I enjoy that topic.  Love should be unconditional and you painted that quite well in this. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful positive romantic poem. The picture, the words and emotions are married together perfectly. You must have learned that in Shediac watching the sea roll in. (Smile) Eric |
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