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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-01-31 05:53 PM


        Truth and Time

A whistling Winter wind
through bare branches

Spring dew anointing
the first cherry blossoms

Summer rain striking
  dry clay

Autumn leaves
falling by moonlight

in each of these …
the voice of truth
and time passing

         --- b. e. adams (1/31/2009)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2009-01-31 05:56 PM


yes and each example you gave is just beautiful
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-02-02 01:42 PM


Phil saw his shadow this morning
so maybe we'll need to settle for DREAMING of
Spring.

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2009-02-02 06:35 PM


secondhanddreampoet - looking forward to spring coming, and winter passing, nice write...

BC

WindWalker11
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4 posted 2009-02-02 07:02 PM


This was very nice: I too am looking forward to the coming of Spring.
Margherita
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5 posted 2009-02-03 03:45 AM


"The voice of truth" yes, dear Bruce, you listen and watch so intensely and bless us with your beautiful perceptions.

Love,
Margherita

gilead
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6 posted 2009-02-03 08:58 PM


The four seasons of earth, made transcendent in the mind of a gifted poet. I am there, present in body and spirit, feeling the wintry wind, beholding the cherry blossoms of spring, dancing like a kid in the summer rain, and listening to the crackle of the fallen leaves of autumn beneath my feet, as I stroll in the shadows of moonlight. All of this, this truth, revealed in the lines of an uncommon poem!

Thanks for this joyful reading in a time of sweet sadness.

art

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2009-02-05 01:45 PM


The seasons come alive so beautifully here.
A soothing balm against an icy winter for so many.
                                  Ida

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displaced
8 posted 2009-02-05 01:48 PM


sadly beautiful


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