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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2009-01-31 07:29 AM



I am waiting for a breeze to sweep
The winter from my eyes
I am looking toward the south
For summer geese to fill the skies

I’m weary spent of icy limbs
And landscapes carved in white
I’m going to travel on a dream
Of summer green tonight

Let sunshine warm my winter bones
Let flowers fill my soul
Erase the gray of gloomy skies
Sweep out the biting cold

Let balmy fragrance fill each breath
Let pastel colors trim
The woods with lacy purple
On a January whim

But even poet minds can handle
So much fantasy
And then give in to blankets
And a nice hot cup of tea

ELizabeth Santos

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Nan
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1 posted 2009-01-31 09:52 AM


I think it was a February day that I spent driving around with you enjoying the "Crystal Forest" that covered southeastern Pennsylvania after a huge rain storm froze an icy covering over hill and dale.  That was gorgeous.. but I like summer too!  Thanks, Lizzy..


Marc-Andre
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2 posted 2009-01-31 10:15 AM


The last two stanzas were especially delicious Mark
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3 posted 2009-01-31 10:54 AM


It is a pleasure to read you again Liz.
You have captured the Pennsylvania winter oh so perfectly.  Peace ~D

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4 posted 2009-02-06 10:14 AM


I’m going to travel on a dream
Of summer green tonight

Thank you for taking us with you! *S* And thanks for reminding me of one of my favorite poems:

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Sunshine
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5 posted 2009-02-06 12:39 PM


Poets and tea...'tis a given.


Stay warm, dear one!


ethome
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6 posted 2009-02-06 02:43 PM


I'm smiling big at this one Elizabeth.

Yes, I share your sentiment exactly. However, I will take just a dash of milk in mine please.

Eric

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7 posted 2009-02-06 11:37 PM


Elizabeth, this is so beautiful. I am so ready for Spring.
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8 posted 2009-02-10 02:37 AM


SO lovely!  I love cuddling a book and sipping hot chocolate on a cold December day.... but come January, I'm always ready for my bones to thaw!     
Alison
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9 posted 2009-02-10 10:42 PM


Elizabeth,

Oh, I so understand this and long for the same thing.  I want color and flowers and sunshine that has warmth.  It's coming - I know it is. In the meantime, join me for a cup of tea?

Alison

Suncleaver
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10 posted 2009-02-11 12:44 PM


A lovely poem, here's to spring and a new beginning for all.

I like mine white with no sugar.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Martie
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11 posted 2009-02-11 12:03 PM


I'd love to be sitting with you before a warm fireplace sipping tea, and watching the winter, outside.  Love you, Liz!  
vandana
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12 posted 2009-02-11 12:37 PM


good read
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