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Open Poetry #44

Feeble Words

SiR3N
Junior Member

since 2007-03-07

Posts 16
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-01-31 02:00 AM

I cant tell you how I feel.
The words wont cling; they drift away,
intoxicated, slight, unreal,
resisting what I want to say

(how I know our love won't fade,
the things I dream when you are gone,
the things of which all want is made,
why absences go on and on).

They reel and stow away their charms,
distracted, shady, and aloof;
I'd rather have you in my arms
and whisper nothings, love, as proof.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2009-01-31 02:11 AM

Hello Jarrod and welcome to our pages blue... I do so like your wonderful gifting to us...

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-01-31 05:47 AM

Jarrod welcome to pip's
Love the poem This is a nice write

SiR3N
Junior Member

since 2007-03-07

Posts 16
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-01-31 10:30 PM

Cool, thanks alot. Any more feedback anyone?

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