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Song for Trish
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Song for Trish |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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This was inspired by some of the poetry I've read today on this site. There isn’t going to be a happy after and ever seems forever and a day falling stars not wished upon have burnt out from despair and nothing silver lines those clouds that cover me with grey. Once I walked with gladdened steps talked away the night time hours made promises that offered second chances looked for dawning in your eyes saw hope mirrored there until the day we wed. Now we exchange love at a distance telephone conversations, text and muffled sobs during nights together scorched hands show to touch is to be hurt what I wouldn’t give to feel once more know love with all its vagaries, its splendour. Always do more than is required of you George Patton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Keth You really captured the frustrated emotional sadness......Don't know what poem you got it from but it was a good inspiration for you. Don't forget our picnic........(smile).... Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
scorched hands show to touch is to be hurt what I wouldn’t give to feel once more know love with all its vagaries, its splendour. You and me both, dear friend. *S* Some songs are sad ones and this is regret-laden... but beautiful. *S* |
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