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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Starlight and roses my vigil keep, vespers whisper, windchimes weep for stolen blissful clime to steep tea leaves and tears before I sleep. Dream lapsed shadow, indigo grew cauldron of silence, broken-heart brew, the meld of skin and amaranth dawn in velour hours, curtains drawn. Incant and murmur, a dusty shelf, to resurrect my would-be self, melody chancing her dance in blue, evanescent, gossamer as morning dew ~ While moonlight taunts of poetry and paper rise hungrily, hauntingly, echoes and vapor [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (01-30-2009 09:58 AM).] |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
This is bomb-diggity. I feel sometimes like my brain doesn't have the capacity to rhyme. So I'm always impressed when someone else does.  -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a treat to find you here! Loved this. It made me feel spinning 'round waving a healing burning sage stick. Nice to read you again, Klassy Lassy. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
viking_metal, thank you for smiling on this! I have to work at rhyme sometimes, but I hear it. I am learning free verse and prose poetry, too. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Midnitesun ~ "a burning sage stick," -- how exotic, and such a pleasing image. The closest I ever have gotten to sage is when I stuff a turkey, and I love the armoma of comfort as it cooks. Comfort and healing...mmm, yes. A lovely gentle review!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, lookee here! The Klassy One is baaack! ~ and with another fine gem from her pen! ~ Perfection in rhythm 'n rhyme! Love your poetry ~ and you! Giving you a humongous, welcome-back huggarooni! Love, Linda |
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Lisa Teller Junior Member
since 2009-01-27
Posts 11usa |
I love poetry that rhymes...this is it. loved it . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where've you been, anyway?  You're pen and wit are in fine verse... Good job! |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Lovely write Karen, good to see you posting here again. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed this, Karen. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 K, email me (the one listed here @Pips) with your snail mail addy, and I will send you one of my very own homegrown/home wrapped sage sticks. Sage is a powerful healer, one of Gaia's sacred gifts. Kacy |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
rhyme most typically has little appeal for me; however, this 'write' is extremely fine! MUCH (and long-sustained') applause for this 'penning'!! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Earth Angel, heheheh! I love you and your poetry, too!...so full of spirit and life and effervescence! Your welcome is wonderful...and the others here, too, who took time for me. My eyes are welling....  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
My pleasure, Lisa! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Sunshine!  Thank you! I have been pretty scarce, haven't I? Life has a way of setting up detours at times, and I've had a little trouble keeping my muse in tow. It's good to be here again, though. Karen |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
sewasham, Thank you! Am so looking forward to reading your poetry again and going on a mental mini journey through your heart-warming stories. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Marchmadness Thank you ...  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
secondhanddreampoet, awww....  I'm so glad not to have disappointed you. I like various forms of poetry, but I'm not adept at most of it. I've learned so much from reading other's work. It's nice to meet you, and I'm sure we will cross paths again. [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (01-31-2009 11:24 AM).] |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
hello, Is this the Klassy lassy from A.P.? William here Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
wonderful piece with fine rhythms Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Burk28: Thank you. Yes, I also post on AP sometimes. Good to see you, Bill! ~Karen |
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