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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Vertigo The crescent moon smiles On the city skyline With its yellow stained teeth If it's breath wasn't foul So polluted with hate I could have been in love Juju -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (01-30-2009 06:27 PM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, This is an interesting poem. Some people love the city for the kind people that live there. We overlook the bad. I suppose that's why we live here, and why we're fellow city people. Love Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Juju, I am always intrigued with the view of the world through your eyes of a poetic shade of blue.  Your poetry is uniquely, and vividly expressed and is very special.  EA |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I actually love the city, but sometimes I hate it lol. -Juju |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's a modern day reality summary everyone should think about.....Well written! Eric |
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