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Open Poetry #44

From you, From me

j Tomorrow
Junior Member

since 2008-08-31

Posts 14
Boston

0 posted 2009-01-29 05:31 PM

I shy away from you
like trees cut to cower from power lines
I don't know what to do
when colors cry over a crayola sky

I am confused with love
fallen from my nest and forced to fly

My desire for you
is air I cannot breathe
For you are too far from me

Burk28
Member

since 2009-01-08

Posts 80
Michigan USA

1 posted 2009-01-29 10:43 PM

heartfelt and longing, a beutiful piece

Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

2 posted 2009-01-30 02:40 PM

Very Very nice. My kind of visualization!

Rich

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-01-30 03:07 PM

I appreciated every line, howver, the following ones are especially memorable for me ~

"I am confused with love
fallen from my nest and forced to fly"

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