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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray

0 posted 2009-01-28 09:49 PM


It was the same every day.
She would take a booth and he the bar.
Sometimes in unison
Each removed then lit their cigarettes,
In ritual both taking a swig of coffee.

She would read the paper,
He would write for it,
His leather bound book at his side.

Both in love with stories.
Stories of places they had never been,
People they had never met.

Only…he was experiencing the adventure
The discovering of both.
Creating for his public,
The visions of life’s events.

To him, she was never seen
Dirty flaxen hair
And a coat full of wear
So invisible to the story tellers eyes.

Then on a day,
A day much like today,
She was taken into the mission.
Cleaned and scrubbed
Given clothes and grub
A bed to sooth her aching bones.

Charity gave her hope
And with money from a job
She stopped to have her coffee
And she was seen…

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2009-01-28 10:16 PM


This seems like a moment that only
a poet could have observed...
so tell me, truth, or fiction?


amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2009-01-28 10:19 PM


A metaphor
A wish
And maybe a dream.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-01-29 12:08 PM


I could vividly see it playing out before me in sepia tones. Great metaphorical writing!

Abracadabra!


Linda

steavenr
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4 posted 2009-01-29 01:31 AM


you told this so well that I thought I was there...and the memories still linger...as if I were...nicely done
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2009-01-29 02:00 AM


Like the open end of this and it's a really well told poetic story.

Eric

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2009-01-29 04:02 PM


Thank you, amusemi, for the dreamy wish.
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