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VampireWifey
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0 posted 2009-01-28 08:02 PM


unknown

I hold a knife close to my wrist
slowly rubbing it down my wrist just imaginig how much it would feel so good to feel the point hit the vein.
feeling the blood trickling down my hand knowing that my life is about to end
no more pain and no more sorrow
just living with the angels where nothing but good happens but then when I come back to reality I see that knife in my hand and say to myself that this is not how my life is suppose to be so I put the knife back away and just walkaway.

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Lisa Teller
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1 posted 2009-01-28 09:39 PM


The double edged sword...This would be a fitting title. When you read this post it displays a conflict...two sides two desicions.
VampireWifey
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2 posted 2009-01-29 12:30 PM


i like that thank you Lisa Teller

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