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Walk, Confess and Escape...
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Walk, Confess and Escape... |
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scorsese101 New Member
since 2009-01-28
Posts 8 |
Walk in the rain Because you might never get to walk again Confess your love for everyone Because you might not be able to love again Escape you're comfort zone every now and then So you don't take having your feet on the ground for granted Walk the highest mountain so you can see the world from a different view confess all your secrets so your voice of conscience can speak Escape the city, and ride in the wind. So that stresses will be temporarily departed Walk just to walk Confess just to talk and escape reality before you do. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your first name wouldn't happen to be Martin, would it? ~ lol Sorry, I couldn't resist that! Hi, welcome to pipTalk. I enjoyed your debuting poem! Some sage advice there ~ some of which I should follow more often!  Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,  Earth Angel  |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I really enjoyed the format of this and it's so pretty. We really shouldn't take anything for granted in life. Enjoyed... |
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scorsese101 New Member
since 2009-01-28
Posts 8 |
Haha thanks! i mean it's the first time i've ever showed anyone else my stuff though...always wrote but meh i just don't know.. Wrote this today after a little brainwave |
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scorsese101 New Member
since 2009-01-28
Posts 8 |
Wow, thanks gothic... |
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